Persuasive speech "Education for future parents"
All in all, I'm ready with my final peruasive speech, more precisely with its draft. So hope to read your comments and corrections about it. It would very helpful. Thank you in advance!)
Education for future parents
We all get
education. We learn how to be an engineer, an actress, a doctor, a manager. But
there is no educational programme on how to be a parent while it's one of the
most important roles we play in this life, at least it's not the least. One
American actress, Mayim Bialik, said: "I came to parenting the way most of
us do - knowing nothing and trying to learn everything". So what if
someone taught us to be parents beforehand? Does education for parents make sense
at all? I believe, yes. People should get special education before becoming
parents. There are lot of reasons to persuade you.
The first reason
I think so is that sometimes people don’t know about problems they can face
when they become parents. They don’t expect sleepless nights, endless crying,
problems with homework, first love and the awkward age. Such situations are described
in the sitcom The Middle. There are three children in the Heck’s family. And
parents always have new challenges. For example, their daughter fell in love
with a boy who doesn’t like her. That was a real tragedy and parents had to
reassure her. They made a lot of attempts. But if they were ready for these
challenges, they would take it easier.
The second
reason is the following. I think people should know the main things they should
take care about. When I was born, my parents washed me in hot water, fed me cabbage
and I was always hungry. My granny who was more experienced saved me from
starvation. It’s about physiological things. But there are some things
connected with upbringing. My friend told me that the requirements of her
mother and father were different and it always made her confused. Our parents
could avoid these problems if someone informed them.
The last reason
is that some people are too irresponsible; they can’t take care even about
themselves. In one Russian film Volchok there is an example of a mother like
this. She left her daughter to find a man, always drank and was miserable. When
her daughter grew up, she became a diffident person with psychological
complexes. Also I can tell you lots of stories from my home town where parents
don’t care about where their children walk, how they study, what they do and
what they feel. But with the educational programme for parents the specialists
can tell people whether they are ready or not and give some recommendations.
Being a parent
is really challenging, sometimes it seems that it’s impossible to prepare for unpredictable
situations in this life but nevertheless we can learn useful theory, about
things which we should keep in mind, and whether we are ready to be parents. So
that’s what I believe in and hope that I made you to think about this problem.
Hi, Arina! Thank you for your speech, I like it.
ОтветитьУдалитьThe introduction is very strong and to the point, which is good.
However, I'd like to share a few ideas that could help you to make the speech even better in terms of agrumentation and effectiveness.
The body paragraphs are a little bit confusing. I'd consider not only giving examples of bad parenting but also providing suggestions what knowledge "parents to be" could be taught. Like a statement, you know?
Personally, I find more effective to formulate the first phrase of each body paragraph as a statement. For instance, "The second reason for parents to go through a training is to learn basic rules of child care." or "Finally, future parents should learn how to be responsible." See, in short, unambiguous sentences. Try to avoid lots of negative prefixes together with negative verb forms in a phrase, i.e. "people are too irresponsible; they can't take care..."
Again, no push, just something to consider in order to sound more confident when presenting the speech to the audience ;)
Thank you very much!
УдалитьYour additions are really useful for me. And I'll try to consider all of them